Though I still want to come back and rework some of my cardboard compositions, I thought this would be a good opportunity to try and apply the feedback I got. The main thing is that I did not create enough contrast between the shapes. Whether it was in size or or in the shapes put together, they were too similar, and it was sometimes hard to see which shape was dominant, subdominant and subordinate.
So the main I thing I did was thing I did was play with school, as through conversation with some other students I realised that was really important. I also made sure the dominant one had an important role, that the other shapes couldn’t stay as they were if it wasn’t there, as I felt that’s what makes it dominant.
Overall, I think I did a better job this time, and I feel the compositions are a lot more dynamic and interesting.
I like the contrast between the sizes of the cuboids!
I like the fact that you have used different colours of plastic to create your cuboids and your compositions overall look much cleaner.
Clear work with plastic and glueing, nice compositions. I also really like that you used different colour for each composition. Very nice work overall!
I think the fact that all of the cuboids vary in size and most in shape within the composition makes them strong!
I like that you used different colors! It makes it very interesting. I also like how you write in your posts.
Great job! Each combination is composed of a large cube and two small cubes. I can see that they are very stable.
The cuboids look really clean and well made. It’s also nice that you managed to get plastics of different colors!
I like the fact that you used different colors and plastic materials for each composition, good job.
i love how neat and clear your compositions are. Also, i cant not agree that the colours are really attractive as well.
Your compositions look so neat and tidy！Different colors are really interesting！
They are so colourful! and can see the dominant, the subdominant and the subordinate clearly
I like how your volumes compliment each other, the balance in dimensions is very pleasing to look at!