to Zixuan Liu
Your blog is excellent. I can clearly understand the theme you want to express from your blog. It’s very delightful to see that you have searched for a lot of additional resources to support and supplement your project. Meanwhile, the rich pictures and page design also make your blog more interesting. You have a clear plan for your project every week and raise new questions. This is very in line with our group rule. I will also learn from you in this aspect. However, the content of your post is too lengthy. I need to spend more time reading. I hope you can state your project more concisely and directly. You have planned to pay more attention to more artists and artworks. I look forward to seeing more of this part in your post.
To Elton Li
Your blog is very comprehensive. You have considered your personal curatorial theme from various aspects. You have already considered the complete curatorial theme and the artists. I’m also glad to see that you have learned knowledge from offline activities and thought about the project.
However, there might be a lack of some resources in your blog. Have you read some relevant literature? Or attended lectures related to artificial intelligence? I believe that sufficient theoretical knowledge will make your project more valuable.
In terms of blog design, it would be better if you could add more pictures for display. This will help me better understand your content. Overall, it is an excellent blog!
