Response to peer review
I have carefully read the advice given by Kate and benefited a lot from it. I have carefully absorbed the knowledge she gave me and tried to make more progress in my curatorial work.
Kate suggested that I introduce the production process of recyclable textiles in more detail, that is, they are not only pure chemical synthesis products, but also new energy products that contain modern technological elements. I have added a description of this aspect in my offline curation and my personal review, hoping to enable readers to understand the working principle and process of recycled textiles in more detail
In addition, kate also suggested that I add some picture descriptions in the file to facilitate the audience’s reading and understanding. This suggestion is very appropriate. I tried to add pictures to several past blog posts, and I feel that the readability of the blog posts has increased, and the audience can understand what I want to express more simply and intuitively. Therefore, I also added a touch experience link in the offline exhibition. Through intuitive touching and feeling, the audience can also feel the charm of recyclable textiles more easily.
In addition, Kate also provided advice and guidance on my literature reading. With her help, I am very happy that I can find a suitable curatorial scholar to study and improve my offline curation.
All in all, I am very grateful to Kate for her valuable suggestions. I think this exchange of ideas and knowledge sharing is very good, and it can help each of us learn more
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