Tutorial notes to respond to:

  • change the pace of painting – reinforce some aspects and push some back

layered aspect to create a sense of overwhelm and oppression

  • consider the readability of the text, do I want it to be read?

ridiculousness, relating to the viewer on a comedic and universal level #freebritney

  • change the hot yellow! this flattens out the canvas

the hot yellow now sits largely in the centre of the canvas, an accumulation of saturation at the centre of this composition.

  • consider emphasising the feet falling from above

new yellow feet

New tutorial feedback:

  • overload it, pushing into it.

 

Reviewing and changing a painting / Phoebe Logan / Art Practice 3 (2020-2021)[YR] by blogadmin is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution CC BY 3.0