Design revision update, fire escape information, and occupation factor.
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LO1 – (. More precedent studies 2. Find articles about benefits to the mental health of these activities you accommodate) You’ve got some interesting precedent studies – but you need to develop more. Visiting indoor skate parks such as Transgression Park would be an easy way to show your understanding of this. Also, look at DiscoverEd and google scholar for articles about the benefits to the mental health of these activities. Your blogs haven’t been engaged with since week 3 – that’s something you should easily be able to do -r remember to update, reflect, and plan each week, and that will help. The miro boards have information that should be included. You need to push yourself beyond what you already know – you’ll gain a lot by doing that. Consider what you might undertake as primary research for questionnaires or interviews.
LO2 – ( 1. Develop an on-site plan – relationship with surrounding buildings, traffic lines, where are other skating areas or parkour areas. 2. More information about Leith as a community ) You’ve clear existing drawings now – just remember that section lines are only shown on the plan, not on elevation. Photos and site visits have helped you understand this sites opportunities. Mapping out similar type places or other types of buildings used by your focus demographic will help show that you understand why this site work. Including things like proximity to trams and buses will also support this. A little more information about Leith is needed – you talk about how its an important community but don’t then give any more in-depth information. That’s easy to find out and will be really helpful for you.
LO3- ( Do research and be clear about the brief and accommodation schedule) At the moment, you have a statement about what you want to do but not a real brief. You must have a brief to support the development of ideas. List what the different areas of accommodation are. You need to approach this more carefully to allow the reader to understand why your project is so important, what its aspirations are, and what spaces will deliver its potential. If you don’t write this down, then you’re limiting yourself at the design stage and wasting time you don’t need to. Imagine you’re a user and a worker there – list all the spaces you think you need and ensure you’ve researched to support that. From there, you can evolve the brief and accommodation schedule.
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